The article I read was about a devastating car accident in Warren County on May 9th. The car accident was especially devastating because a passenger, 15 year old Sara Porter, died after being rushed to the Albany Medical Center. The driver, Aaron Palait, was driving on route 8 and ended up in a drainage ditch only to barrel into a couple of trees before landing turned over in a pool of standing water.
The central idea of the text is that there was a car accident involving a death. The first paragraph goes on to establish the plot. The who, "A 15 year-old from Ticonderoga." The what, "died Wednesday from injuries suffered." The when, "In a May 9 automobile accident, and the where, "in Warren County." After that the rest of the article just goes into more specific details on the entire plot. Eventually the article includes other people involved in the accident and a brief but detailed description of the accident.
http://www.timesunion.com/local/article/Crash-claims-girl-15-3596571.php
Wednesday, May 30, 2012
Sunday, May 20, 2012
Tried and True

Video Games: A
Procrastinating: A
Eating: A
Being Tall: A
Sleeping: A
Matching: A
Being Bored: A
Tuesday, May 15, 2012
Downtime- What I do Offline to Recharge
It's almost a daily ritual for me to lie down on my black leather couch after school or when I'm not on the computer and watch Netflix through my Xbox 360 console. Netflix is an app that allows you to watch a variety of television shows and movies instantly. There genres range from horror movies to thrillers to comedies to romance movies and many others. I usually watch the show Weeds or The Office or Workaholics. Comedies are my favorite types of shows. Steve Carrell is one of my favorite actors, he plays Michael Scott in the office. Workaholics has to be one of the funniest shows of all time, up there with It's Always Sunny in Philadelphia. When I'm not sitting on my couch watching Netflix, I'm usually doing something active. On a sunny day I'll go outside and play basketball at the community basketball court or swing on the swings. Other outside activities I take part in after school or when I'm not on the computer is working out, playing tennis and/or going for a run or walk. Occasionally I'll stroll on over to my mom's neighborhood and spend the afternoon there. I'll play foosball or pool or just sit and watch Television. Sometimes I'll jump on the trampoline or play with the dogs. I try to be as active as I can as often as I can.
Friday, May 11, 2012
Love to know slideshow

http://freelance-writing.lovetoknow.com/Slideshow:Journal_Writing_Prompts~3
What is your greatest accomplishment in life so far? What do you hope to accomplish in the next five years? Ten years? Twenty years? Do you think your goals are realistic? Do you have a plan for achieving them?
I can't say I've achieved something spontaneous so far in my life, I think about my life a lot and what I want to be. I plan to be a pharmacist when I grow up and I've been planning this for a while now. If I eventually do become a pharmacist I think that would be a great accomplishment, considering I have to go through 7 years of college before getting to that point. I'll be getting my permit soon which I think is another major accomplishment, and I hope to get my license shortly after. I've always been especially proud of my grades and overall academic performance. I know junior years the hardest and that's when I hope to excel. I gave up sports when middle school started and that's something I'd like to start up again before it's too late, even though it might already be. I plan to play football next year, my dad was talking about buying a house for me my brother and my sister before he leaves and moves back to Puerto Rico. I'd live there and go to a local college, preferably Albany School for Pharmacy, until I graduated. After I graduate I want to move South and become employed as a pharmacist and eventually buy a nice home and start my family. I absolutely hate winter and want to experience it as little as possible. In 10 years I should just be finishing school and taking on the next chapter of my life and by 20 years hopefully I'll be settled down with a female. I think my goals are realistic as long as I stay on the straightened arrow. Hopefully this will work out for me because I have back up plans but none of them seem to fit my future as perfectly as this plan does, it definitely won't be easy but nothing worth having is gained easily.
Sunday, May 6, 2012
Philosophy- Communism
Communism: Communism is a revolutionary socialist movement to create a classless, money less, and stateless social order structured upon common ownership of the means of production, as well as social, political, and economical ideology that aims at the establishment of this social order. It began in the 19th century by a man named Karl Marx. I personally do not agree with communism, and don't believe it can be achieved. A form of it can be achieved but not full communism. People are naturally to greedy and selfish, they want more then their peers and want to be looked up to which cannot be achieved in a communist state. Anyone that knows anything besides communism would feel deprived of the things they could have. Most people don't want to be seen as an equal to everyone around them, they want something to stand out. This also is not possible in a communist state. People are naturally lazy as well. In a communist state it's possible to do absolutely nothing and still receive the same thing all your neighbors get. Whether you work or not you will still receive what everyone else receives. A lot of people would take advantage of that and not do any work. It has been attempted numerous times and has not once proved to work, that says something. Culture would be very dull in a communist state and for the most part not enjoyable. People are different and therefore there needs to be a society that allows for variety rather than complete equality
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Communism
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Communism
Tuesday, May 1, 2012
TU Tuesday - Classified
http://timesunion.kaango.com/ad-must-sell-german-shepardsin-need-of-attention/20546889
DOUBLE TROUBLE
These 2 "7 year old's from the same liter" are not only german shephards, but they're brothers. They are both "trained and neutered." The writer of this ad is a 28 year old male named Brandon. The reason he's attempting to sell these German Shephards is because he recently decided to have his girlfriend move in. She's not a fan of dogs at all, she's been afraid of them her whole life. She told him that if she is to move in, the dogs must go. Although Brandon has had these dogs for 5 years now, he thinks things are going well with his girlfriend and would like to make her his fiance sometime soon. The dog on the left, the black one, goes by the name of Baxter. The tan German Shephard is called Maxy. Brandon will only sell these dogs to an owner who will buy them both. Because they are brothers he wants to keep them together. To make sure they go to a good home, Brandon will inspect the owner's home before selling them. They must be previous dog owners and he must approve of the next owner. It won't be an easy thing to do but it's time for Brandon to make advances with his girlfriend Kirsten. Best of luck to them.
DOUBLE TROUBLE
These 2 "7 year old's from the same liter" are not only german shephards, but they're brothers. They are both "trained and neutered." The writer of this ad is a 28 year old male named Brandon. The reason he's attempting to sell these German Shephards is because he recently decided to have his girlfriend move in. She's not a fan of dogs at all, she's been afraid of them her whole life. She told him that if she is to move in, the dogs must go. Although Brandon has had these dogs for 5 years now, he thinks things are going well with his girlfriend and would like to make her his fiance sometime soon. The dog on the left, the black one, goes by the name of Baxter. The tan German Shephard is called Maxy. Brandon will only sell these dogs to an owner who will buy them both. Because they are brothers he wants to keep them together. To make sure they go to a good home, Brandon will inspect the owner's home before selling them. They must be previous dog owners and he must approve of the next owner. It won't be an easy thing to do but it's time for Brandon to make advances with his girlfriend Kirsten. Best of luck to them.
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